I see the way forward:
>Well, that must be what it is—satin.
And last time you were so careful as to even give me an entire conversation option to be a dumbfuck.
>You comment on that.
I don't know if you intended for this to be comical.
>fantasy's fault-lettered fumbling
You know, if she accidentally summoned a demon or something, your content might have some tension. Instead, she's probably just calling me gay or something.
>until you're left
This doesn't make much sense with the femininity variation, since it doesn't work with "noticing" or "flits".
>player.isFemale() && saveContent.timesYurid ?
Very minor, but I think it would be better to repeat the tallness check instead of this (so end it before "a moment" and start it again after). I say this more as a guide moving forward than because this needs to change.
>cool as if she'd been out in the wind
You should add an "as" at the start or a comma after "cool".
>all the while she's
I'm not a big fan of this comma splice, partially because the previous bit isn't a proper clause, so it's just kind of floating there, so I'd probably recommend the "and".
>busy bumblebee. She may be decidedly more skinny than one, but busy
Some honestly odd repetition.
>[Yes]
This entire section just seems like a strange inclusion to me. Why would someone want to theoretically have some unspecified and inconsequential problem like this? What's the thought process, if you're not using the opportunity to insult her or anything? I guess what bothers me is that it kind of 'invents a problem that only exists in this option, but the problem isn't actually real, since you don't describe it. Nothing changes, nothing is gained, and it doesn't really satisfy any roleplay needs as written. I also don't think it's all that necessary if you change the other button to something that just opposes it to tease. But please let me bully her more for no reason, I like that.
>") + With
Missing ".
>With a single hand drawing a sinuous line from your [hips] all the way to your chest, where you inconspicuously air [if (isflat) {yourself|the fabric out}] for just the shortest spell before you
I was considering saying that the "where" might be frontloading the sentence too much, but the "before" is certainly a step too far.
>You're tempted to capitalize on an opening like that, when Marielle finishes up with small nod and an, \"<i>In faith, it... endows you well, [name]. Aye.</i>\"
I don't really see why that would stop you specifically.
>Whether by [if (femininity >= 59) {sheer }]distraction or a genuine lack of words, she doesn't come up
"By" isn't very good for this; she's not using distraction to not come up with something.
>displaces the diffidence she was displaying
My thanks, friend.
>all the fairer for a wearer
I like this one too.
I'm going to stop before the sex scene, and hopefully start up again a bit quicker this time.