That's alright. We know you weren't writing it for us. Any femdom I try to write seems to come out as flavourless pap, so you did better outside your area than I do outside mine. Erotica's hard to write without one's instincts guiding the way.
>Hope the continuation of Day of the Spike isn't as difficult for you.
Maybe it'll be a little smoother because the love interest is a single hivemind rather than multiple individuals.
>(Also why is the Concordat... like that?)
I assumed it was the worst parts of our world developed ad absurdum
, where the ugly seek extermination of all Beauty and Truth.
>What is "froth"?
Imagine a meringue, mousse, or foam. Light, airy, and when put in your mouth the flavour it delivers is in part because
of that fluffy frothiness. Some of Spidernon's stories have the same texture where they rollick gleefully along on their own terms and you can't quite believe that you're enjoying yourself as much as you are. Many come off as pastiches, but there's a little something extra that gives them sparkle. The examples that come to mind for me are Brush and Blade, Unmarried Goose Girl, the Shub-Niggurath stories/Firm stories, and the Maria series.